On this day, October 22, 2016 after 71 years of playing , the Chicago Cubs won against the Dodgers, Los Angeles at Wrigley Field. Fireworks followed with people screaming in joy. People with flags and their bright color Cubs shirt. Their final score was 0-5. Families cheering and hugging with such an emotion. It was an insane night for the Cubs. The next day all you could see was that Cubs had made history.
Monday, October 31, 2016
"Made History"
October 24th, 2016
On this day, October 22, 2016 after 71 years of playing , the Chicago Cubs won against the Dodgers, Los Angeles at Wrigley Field. Fireworks followed with people screaming in joy. People with flags and their bright color Cubs shirt. Their final score was 0-5. Families cheering and hugging with such an emotion. It was an insane night for the Cubs. The next day all you could see was that Cubs had made history.
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On this day, October 22, 2016 after 71 years of playing , the Chicago Cubs won against the Dodgers, Los Angeles at Wrigley Field. Fireworks followed with people screaming in joy. People with flags and their bright color Cubs shirt. Their final score was 0-5. Families cheering and hugging with such an emotion. It was an insane night for the Cubs. The next day all you could see was that Cubs had made history.
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ReplyDeleteYour story talks about how people felt when the Cubs won, the story was kind of subjective because you said that people were glad, but also some people were mad and sad because the Dodgers didn't win. I liked how you were descriptive and gave details like," bright color Cubs shirt" and, "families cheering and hugging with such emotion". One thing I would recommend is adding more details like the name of the arena, how many people went to see the game, the names of players that played an important part of this event, and a conclusion that restates the introduction. You should also add some words that are unusual, for example instead of sayin it was as crazy night you could say it was an insane night for the Cubs because..., and then you could add on to that and make the story more interesting.
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